使用前（８月Top）v.s. 使用後（１１月End）
今年の８月Topに書いた投稿前の論文のAbstructから，１１月Endに書いたものとの違いを述べたい．
８月のものはほぼ自分で書き，１１月のものは２人の大学の研究者に見てもらって書いた．
まず，Purposeの部分で細かくかつ具体的に記述をした．
”a short time interval of X-ray image leads to increasing the imaging dose, resulting in the risk of second cancer. X-rayで取得した短い間隔のイメージは被ばく線量を増加させる，そして2次発生がんを誘発させる”というところを
” there are no concrete demonstration of how to informed decisions regarding the risk, represented by the acronym ALARA, for each institution. Therefore, it has been hypothesized that rational minimization between the improvement of treatment delivery and the reduction of imaging dose may be achievable by CyberKnife if PTV margin is controlled with increasing or decreasing imaging interval. ALARAに従う最適化戦略の決定はそれぞれの施設に委ねられている．それゆえ，最適な照合間隔からPTV Marginが求まれば治療線量デリバリーの改善とイメージング線量の合理的な最小化が達成可能，という仮説を立てた．”
という風に書き換えた．
Methodsの部分では，これまでのやり取りで照合システムを新しいのでシミュレーションしたのかそれともでTarget Locating Systemでこれまで通りやったのか，という部分が分かり難いと指摘があった．なので，”Target Locating Systemとは違う新しいシステム”という意味で，”．．． dedicated monitoring system another with Target Locating System. ”という文を付け加えた．
Key-wordsは，intracranialからinternal marginに変えた．これは，結論にも”Internal Margin”という言葉を使っているためである．
全体的に，投稿する雑誌のAbstractが２５０wordsではなく３００wordsだったので，５０words増やした．
29-Nov. 2020
例題
3-Aug. 2020に書いたもの
Purpose: Although the intra-fraction head variation with IGRT has been achieved high positioning accuracy, a short time interval of X-ray image leads to increasing the imaging dose, resulting in the risk of second cancer. The purpose of this study was to ．．.
Method: The monitoring system that consists of ．．.
Result and Discussion: 省略
Conclusion: 省略
Key-words: imaging interval, intra-fraction, IGRT, intracranial, CyberKnife
(251 words.)
27-Nov. 2020に書いたもの
Purpose: Although the intra-fraction head variation with IGRT in CyberKnife has been achieved high positioning accuracy, there are no concrete demonstration of how to informed decisions regarding the risk, represented by the acronym ALARA, for each institution. Therefore, it has been hypothesized that rational minimization between the improvement of treatment delivery and the reduction of imaging dose may be achievable by CyberKnife if PTV margin is controlled with increasing or decreasing imaging interval. The purpose of this study was to ．．.
Method: A total of 21 shell-fixed patients head treated with CyberKnife was analyzed by the dedicated monitoring system another with Target Locating System. 省略
Result: 省略
Conclusion: 省略
Key-words: imaging interval, intra-fraction, internal margin, IGRT, CyberKnife
(294 words)
